The cinematography was somewhat engaging with the plinking, slow rhythm of the music score, but the overall story was weak. He hit a bump in the road three years out of high school and turned to drugs and alcohol, saying "democracy failed me." Give me a break. He was not a strong character, but a pitiful one. Also, as I mentioned before, I liked the camera work for the most part, except for the drug induced stupor scene toward the end. A little prosaic.

lol irving looks funn homeless but i love it so much

Way to go Jasmine. You are a born filmmaker.
JP

A well -made film, however, I don't buy it - because he blames others and has a good excuse for drinking and doing drugs - and then he says that democracy failed him - nope. He failed himself and he has to get sick of it till he's ready to do something different. No one, no government can help someone get there.

The transitions in the video and the cinematography are great.

Great job, you're going to go far in life.
Lorraine (Andrea's mom)

Wow,AMAZING!!!!
Who is he???

Wow,AMAZING!!!!
Who is he???

that was crazy good, u got what it takes to make it far Jazzy, that was perfect. Music, angles, everything!

Hey jazz that was awesome....keep it going....need a fat actor call me

-nasty

Congratulations, Jasmine! This looks great!

Jasmine--this is awesome, I'm so proud of your work! Thanks for sharing.

Jasmin;

Thank you for showing the other side of life!

Please, keep on showing us what is in your mind;
we all need to know.

All the best;

from miami beach)

Roberto & Rosario

Jasmine,
That was terrific! Nice composition. Keep up the hard work.

-Jason

Hey, Go jazz that was really good. Keep up the hard work!

I'm So PROUD of you!

Great!

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